ChandlerThompson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Arrested Development Line]

Definately has potential.

Even though this was a short flash I can tell you have talent in animation, it looked very nice. You got some points for including a sound bite from my favorite show too. I thought the lip sync was up to par as well. Despite its length I was amused for the duration of the flash.

A simple sound bite doesn't really git the function of a flash animation. Granted, it was a line test, but it needs some concept and depth. I was still impressed by how much skill you included into it, but making it a bit longer, maybe including a storyline would benefit you greatly.

You included a great line from the show, it was great to see a fan of it on this site. You definately show talent, but it is up to you to use to your advantage. Keep up the great work!

[Computed]

Needs some depth here and there.

I thought your animation had a decent storyline. Granted, I've seen flashes and television shows similar to it, but I thought it was an interesting submission. I liked when the character fell over at the end or when they knocked the letters off Google, I thought that was creative.

The voice quality and resolution could se some work. It seemed like it was louder in some part and choppy in other scenes. The animation could also be tweaked a tad, it would make the flash more entertaining. Overall, it was a cute submission with cool characters.

Orginality is the main factor here, mainly because it worked for you and against you. you can definately improve, this was a decent submission. Adding to the plot would benefit you as well. Keep up the good work!

[I am Alone]

Needs some improvement.

I'll start out with the positives, the animation was pretty good. I thought the piano part was perfectly synchronized with the song. Plus you get some bonus points for introducing me to some decent music. You can definately improve after watching the likeness of this flash, it was alright.

You somewhat set a flase interpretation on the flash, mainly due to the piano scene being beautifully animated, but the rest of the flash did not advance the plot. Just a man with a gun isn't a good storyline, plus the deer part needs some explaining, I was lost at that part.

The ending could use some work too, I guess I'm trying to that just some effort would make this flash several times better. I can see you tried hard, but it needs something to draw the viewer back. Anyway, keep up the great work!

[Spring Break Day]

An interesting short.

I thought the voices you used for the characters were creative, it helped me identify their personalities. I liked how the boy was speaking similarly to Olde English, it made me laugh. The random arm grasping the phone and the caller made me laugh as well, you have a good sense of humor.

The animation could use some work in a few places, mainly at the end and when the guy was dancing. I thought the plot could have been a bit more elaborate, just so we could get some background information on the character. Some tweaking here and there should help your skills majorly improve.

I thought the music was very good, I chuckled at the Super Mario Brothers 3 theme and how his ringtone was Axel F. Overall, it was an entertaining flash. Good stuff right there, keep up the good work.

[At The Gym]

Pretty amateur sumbission.

I saw good things and bad things in this flash. I think your animation tyle is very interesting. Steve kinda looked like Rayman in my opinion. I like how you gave Steve and Leo each distinctive personalities, I found that it made it easier to relate to them. It was a decent flash animation.

The sound was painful to listen to, and I could barely understand a word Leo was saying becuase of the voice you used for him. The plot got really fry as it went on, I lost most interest after the treadmill scene. The ending really wasn't too satisfying either, it just ended with a saying. Needless to say, more depth is needed.

By watching your flash I can tell that you can improve your abilities. I think you just need to get a higher quality voice resolution and thicken the storyline, that should gain you more success. Keep up the good work!

[-Sandwich-]

A well made music video.

This flash was very enjoyable. I am impressed with your skill at lip syncing, it was perfect. I liked the animation and all of the personification. My favorite scene was when Edd put the jacket over the water puddle and the sandwich fell over, that was hilarious. I was amused from beginning to end.

I've seen better work from you, but this was a nice project you made. I like Parry Gripp, mainly due to his Do You Like Waffles fame, but it was interesting to hear another song by him. Animating a funny song really benefited theoverall flash, you have a good ear for music.

I'll recommend this to the music videos collection, hopefully it will receive more views there. Congrats on your high score and the daily first, they are rightfully deserved. Keep up the great work!

[The Pretenders]

Another decent video.

I have always found Nick and your humor style to be amusing, this was no different. The parts with the pizza rolls was hilarious. I also liked the scene when Nick was trying to find evidence of where the criminal would strike next. The movie was filled with irony, that is good comedy right there.

There were only a couple problems I had with the flash. At times the video screen would be black and only a glisten of a character would be visible, it annoyed me at times. I understand how difficult it is converting video files to flash, but the sounds were weak and some loud and other soft. I just flt it didn't fit together well. I still enjoyed the movie nonetheless.

When you and Nick were making the gun sounds at each other, it somewhat reminded me of Monty Python, I loved it when you juggled your "gun". It was a pretty good video from the two of you, keep up the good work!

Fro responds:

I think the part that you are talking about with the darkness was when the person was outside in the dark. There wasn't much we could do about it since we didn't use any lighting.

The sounds are weak, and I'm brainstorming some ways to make the voices better.

Thanks.